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A Path Less Traveled
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( x2 y! [% R, z1 w- AI am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown2 w" M/ X. N; M& @6 J' Q* A

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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soultvb now,tvbnow,bttvb: s" E" U+ j) S0 u* ]7 v

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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..0 T$ i  n: u: K, o2 o5 _
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...; X7 }$ b: ]+ v9 J- d: C2 A

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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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A Path Less Traveled
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( V- V2 q7 X  t) U! l- F公仔箱論壇I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb2 B& c' w2 a$ i8 _$ G2 J
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb6 n; [8 R; H6 v6 E
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? 8 z! {, ^& c( y! \
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.( g# b5 ]7 P5 O3 q0 y& a

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