本帖最後由 Keevin 於 2011-8-15 12:20 AM 編輯  I went to Niagara Falls with my younger brothers's daughters last Sunday and Monday
 we went to Water Park to swam and watched Magic Show
and went t ...
Fian. 發表於 2011-8-12 06:58 AM 
It would be much better if you can focus more on grammer and plural
For example, use Brother's daughter instead of BrotherS's daughter. If your younger brother has more than 1 daughter, use brother's daughterS.
And whenever you use "to" connecting two verbs, use present tense.
For example, use "to swim" instead of "to swam".
By the way, when do you come back to Hong Kong ?
Best wishes !! |
發表於 2011-8-14 05:17 PM
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I was very happy to talked with you last night
